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[EDIT8/31: Okay, the print outs were proving too yellow, and too dull, so after much trial and error the resulting image is this! again, i need final confirmations before I send this off to print! Thank you so much for all your help!]
Like the bookmark, it will be on a matte surface. Sales from these stickers I will put towards making nice shiney stickers<3 (new design will be made for those if so wished...;^^) Again, let me know thoughts and suggestions please ><! thank you for your help! ~Angi |
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Good points:
That being said you should know that this is a damn good piece. Composition, I can't find much wrong with it.The rendering is subtle, the washed out palette looks deliberate, it's all gravy.
Things that MAY or MAY NOT need to change possibly-after-all-it's-just-an-opinion-dont'-be-upset-you-know-I-love-your-work:
I find the shine on the guy's hair [while beautifully done] to be a tad distracting, seeing as it's the only thing in the entire piece with any level of rendering. I like how her lips match the rose and his hair plays to his shirt and I think the shine takes away from that.
One way to solve it [i think] is to either bring some rendering to the girl's hair, or take his rendering down a notch so they can match up a bit more. Not TOO much, because then he'll sink right into her and then it's no good. Or on the other hand if you take the rendering away completely to match the girls' you can lighten the BG significantly and that'll make them pop nicely. [or leave the BG and lighten the flesh, either way could work].
For composition, I say you try a frame. Maybe a white one that goes behind them?
Overall, good show Angie-chan! Great designs, great rendering, great textures.
-PeZ!
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